Go on

I tried to reason with you But you just ran so far away Away from all your problems Away from all your dreams Away from this life you lead Go on, go on Just run away Go on, go on Leave today Go on, go on There’s nothing here Go on, go on Be free Yesterday I got so sad I felt like I could die Tommorow I got so blue that I thought I could cry I cannot stay here for good I cannot live here with you You yell and you plea “Come back, Come back to me” And I all say in whispered tounges is “Can’t you see we were never meant to be?” Go on, go on Just run away Go on, go on Leave today Go on, go on There’s nothing here Go on, go on Be free Come back, come back Come to me Come back, come back Can’t you see I’m dead without you? Come back, come back Come back to me Go on, go on Go and be free

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  joeker007
  August 18, 2005
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  These are some pretty decent lyrics, maybe a bit cliche, but still pretty good. I feel like the chorus could use more substance, though. I like the repitition, but maybe you can change the words or add some more the the lines in between “Go on, Go on.”

  I think in the last stanza/verse, line 33 kinda interrupts the flow of it. Maybe you can shorten it or remove it all together.

  In the verses, you could probably be a little more descriptive, at least in the first four lines of verse 2. Try thesaurus.com, lol, I use it a lot.

  All in all it was pretty good and I’d like to hear the beat you must have had in mind when writing it.

  Well, I hope I helped a bit.

  ~Joe

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