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Without a doubt in my mind

I hate her.

She ...
Is loud
annoying
Makes my head hurt
Raises my blood pressure
Takes life to the next level
Has an amazing smile
is everything
is my soul

I love her.
Without a doubt in my mind.

Author notes

i dont like it when ppl do these cheesy things. but you know you love them when you cant help it.

How can I improve this?

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Comments

  • MrsEllis
    February 20
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    well

    You could probably take out the annoying part and put something a little less harsh