Life is too short, to worry about tomorrow,
Live each day the best we can.
Yesterdays are past and filled with sorrow,
Filled with things done and left undone.
When we waken in the morning light,
The minds are clear of the doubts and fears.
Of yesterday's worry, pain and woe,
We know God's promises are here.
Love is a very precious thing,
Given to man by God.
Cannot be traded, bought or sold,
It fills our hearts with Joy untold.
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Life is a gift !!!
I like your poetry. I like your attitude. If you not mind I just allow myself to add some words to yours...
Victory
1Life is too short, to worry about tomorrow,
2Live each gifted day, doing the best, that we can.
3Yesterdays are past, filled with dreams and sorrow,
4Filled with things done and left undone, if you mind?
5When we waken in the morning light with expect sight
6The minds are clear of the doubts and fears.
7Of yesterday's worry, pain and woe with tears
8We know God's promises are here, we think ...
9Love is a very precious, unpredictable thing,
10Given to man by God.
11Cannot be traded, bought or sold,
12It fills our hearts with Joy untold.
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Wow, you have really brought out the message you were striving for in this piece and that shows just how much of a well written poet you truly are. The rhythm and flow of your words going throughout the poem truly is amazing and an inspiration to us all. I am so glad you have shared this poem with us all and I cannot wait to read more of your amazing work as this has really been a joy to read. Nicely done and God bless
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Glad u like it
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Love your poem.I am particularly fond of spiritual poems as too many people shy away from them.
Lines 9-12 are a very powerful message in this materialistic age.
Can I just say on a personal note that for someone that writes inspirational poetry about
God, your chosen name "vampire-lover" doesn´t seem to harmonise.(just a personal opinion)
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i kno and thanks
im in love with vampire movires so that was the first name i came up with
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beautiful....
life is too short
to worry
about tomorrow
live
each day
the best we can
yesterdays are
past and
filled with sorrow
filled
with things done
and left undone
when we waken
in the morning light
the minds are
clear of the doubts
and fears
of yesterday's worry
pain and woe
we know
God's
promises are here.
love is a very
precious thing
given to man by God
cannot be traded
bought or sold
it fills
our hearts
with Joy untold.....
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GOOOOODD:)
this is another poem i read by u and i seee u have a gr8 way of expressing your emotions and ideas and every sentence is true and the reality.....gr8 job
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ive been depresses lately and thats all i do is write and...is that your real picture cause you are really pretty... -
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1st i wanna tell u that writing comes out of feelings ALWAYS u can never write if ur not happy or sad or when u dont have aything to say to feel relaxed and writing is the best way rather than to talk to someone...and yes that is my real pic :$ 10x for finding me pretty...take care
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February 7, 2006