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  • on Dedicated to Little Mama by barefoot contessa, on August 22, 2007
    I'm so sorry it took so long for me to get back with you on your comment. The last couple of times that I've logged on, I wasn't feeling very well. I just wanted to come on and read, and I really should of just stayed in bed.

    You was wondering about 'quarter moons'.

    Quarter = the silver tongs of changing diapers
    Moons = many months carrying a baby

    I liked your suggestion. It gives me a good example of what I can do with the last stanza. My mind just spun an idea as I'm writing this.

    I'm glad that you liked the poem also. If all the responses are this helpful on sharepoetry, I see myself posting more often on here. I hardly get any good constructive feedback on allpoetry.com or comments at all for that matter.

    -Aly