- Member since December 16, 2009.
- I am a 21 year old person
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- 30 questions for me at allpoetry
1. Have you ever laughed so hard you peed in your pants or had some sort of beverage come out of your nose? If so, tell me about it.
- my poems thoughts at allpoetry
write something new
every day - tree of life at allpoetry
i wonder just
how far you are
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Cynder- on December 16, 2009Hello!
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on Silver Waves by Pretty Little Daisy, on December 23, 2009sometimes writing a poem is the best way to get those feelings out, and when you are writing to get your feelings out, then the length of the poem doesnt matter at all. this was a great piece and I think I can identify with it. keep it up
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on The Perfect Guy by Lovealotbear21, on December 21, 2009I really liked this piece especially the opening few lines they have great flow and rhyme. At line 15 till the end it seems to lose the rhyme and flow, that is the only thing i could find. Otherwise great job and keep it up!
