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Blazingleo

My Poetry

  • Kitty cried on christmas day and kitty cried that night / the mouse next door was in a violent mood and so they began to fight / and grave
    125 words, 3 comments, October 4
  • the dogs had left but the people were barking in the park
    102 words, 5 comments, April 18. In Free verse
  • she went when flowers were blooming / she went when the day was gay / not a soul was really mourning / it seemed she wasn't far away / the birds ,they were chirping / the wind chimes sang a song / with her sweet memories we / just rolled
    79 words, 3 comments, December 12, 2007. In Sad

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  • They Told Me To Remember To Forget at allpoetry
    They told me to remember to forget and they told me to smile I had already broken my back and wearily walked many a mile
  • The storm came at allpoetry
    there is hope when all hopes are lost
  • We are one at allpoetry
    A family is the best thing in the world

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  • on Ecstasy by Mermaid28, on October 13

    nice

    The poem has a sensuous feel .If wishes were horses beggars would ride for some.

  • on Under The Bridge by Brian Balzer, on October 8

    good

    The tone is apt and the poem is interesting. Excellent rhyming. The language is simple and sweet.Now for those with one track minds,a good laugh.This is sensual and yet so wonderfully innocent.Good poem

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