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Blue2ki

  • Member since June 17, 2006.
  • I am a 20 year old guy from Texas (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm listening to the messges of the soul, with the solid beat..
  • I have 24 comments, 4 archived poems

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  • on prayer by blue2ki, on August 4, 2007
    thanks for your comment bill. what i wrote here, was something i really felt and had gone through, although that time has past, but a part of it is still inside me, its anything but dead/dormant. i wrote this when i got out of my chronic heroin habit and then soon after, i lost natalia to cancer, i really loved her and i still do. she did not deserve it, death was something diffrent, but the pain she went through, was inhuman, and after her, im in pain, i miss her, we were so young.. i still want to know why does god punish us like this, i must have been a sinner in my past life, so this is my penance. love didnt bind us, maybe our pain would. god bless her.

  • on natalia by blue2ki, on July 31, 2007
    thanks for your comment lad. much appreciated.