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  • Kiwi853
    Aug 28 8:33 AM 2005
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    I have a problem with making my rhyming to obvious and predictable. Will someone read my most recent poem “Opened”? I would really like your advice.

  • Kiwi853
    September 5, 2005
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    Thanks

    I just to say thank you to all of the people that did help me.
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