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  • on Death-Options by dave ochs, on September 6, 2006

    I liked it

    At fist i read it and ignored the numbers down the side, not really realising that they were there, and i liked it. To me it epitamized the way in which we treat death. I thought that the part about the medical students however was a bit vulgur and unfair, although the point about no one sueing is valid. When i read it again with the numbers, it read like a list of statements...was this intended? I feel that it created a sense of harsh coldness sometimes associated with death. Overall a good poem

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