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  • on untitled by , on April 22

    Two Thumbs Up

    20 words would be difficult to do much with but that did not stop you. You not only wrote a poem that fits your requirements, but it flows well, and I think looks deeper into the picture then the obvious. Great Job.

    . Rewarded 4

  • on The (other) Woman by freefromhiding, on April 22

    Does not mince words

    Well you really can tell that you poured your heart into your poem. I really like your honesty, and the perspective you offer. I don't get the feeling that you are being one sided or unrealistic, on the contrary you are fair with all parties-Him, and the "other woman" but still find a way to express your feelings. I wish you the best!