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Carefullydestructive

I am 18 and caught in that battle between complete independence and the need to be coddled. I want to change the world. I am intensely protective of the people I love. I laugh in public in an effort to seem more approachable by people, even if nothing is funny. I'm easily forgettable and hopelessly dependent on those around me. I don't believe everything the Bible or a politician says, but I do believe in thinking for yourself.

  • Last seen on Nov 13 2:30 AM. Member since June 17.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Letting go sounds so easy.".
  • I am a 18 year old girl from North Carolina (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a student..
  • I have 5 comments, 2 archived poems

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  • Brian Balzer : Hi Carefullydestructive, on September 24
    Welcome to sharepoetry. I can tell your poetry is going to continue to improve. You take advice as what it is. Adice. Some poets take it as an attack on thier poem or talant or whatever. You have the right attitude. That's how we learn to write better poetry. I've learned a great deal since joining sharepoetry.
    When you have time please stop by my homepage and take a stroll through my Poetry Garden story which is like a philosophy. Then if you wouldn't mind I would love for you to sign my guestbook. Thanks and again welcome.
    Hopefully I'll see many more poems from you.
    BKB
  • marcusmoore : what's this?? on September 24
    a female writing about sportscenter in her poetry??? I must meet this hybrid of fun and emotion. It's not often that you find girls or women that like sportscenter and still like poetry. That's definately a rarity that's becoming more common, but not common enough. It's good to have an open mind about things, which is hard to do and I remind myself often that it's what's best overall. Just read your profile and one of your poems and felt the need to say hello. well since I've said it and now have no more excuse for being here I'll have to be leaving now LoL. Hope to hear from ya soon

    TTYL
    Marcus
  • skipeople : Welcome to SP! on June 18
    glad to chat, help, or be ignored. Which ever will bake your muffins!

    Ashley =]

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  • on Wednesday's Song by marcusmoore, on September 24
    It's an all too familiar thing. In so many relationships, it seems like one person is more invested than the other after awhile. And in my experience, those are the hardest ones to get over.

  • on Exfoliating An Ex by marcusmoore, on September 24

    I feel like you may have written this about me.

    Ha, well not me, but someone I dated.

    The third stanza is really powerful. I'm haunted by past relationhips.

    I am in love with your writing.