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February Angel on October 25Hi ! Just wanted to read few of your poems but I guess you've removed them .I can't find them in here. If you'll ever post sth in here just message me and I'll give it a read.
~Feb~
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Brian Balzer : Hey chloesunshine, on September 23Can I call you C. for short? Welcome to share poetry (again). I tried to comment on Today after you commented on Pretty Bird before you changed your title but an error prevented me. I'll try, try again till I'm allowed. Please stop by my homepage and take a stroll through my Poetry Garden story which is like a philosophy and then if you don't mind I'd like you to sign my book. Again welcome. Keep reading other poets and leaving those comments. That's the best way to get you poems read. Good Luck. Now I'm off to read:
Give It To Me Today
Read ya now,
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chloesunshine : also.. on September 23the title was just meant to grab your attention. haha. its not legitimate. the real title was 'Today' but I figured that wasn't as effective as 'Give it to me' `
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chloesunshine : i would really appreciate a comment. on September 23haha i put this poem under every categry so more people would read it. please tell me what you think. it's not meant to have a huge impact on your existance, but just to make you picture the beauty i observe outside of my house, the contrast between man and manicured nature. it's not really the categories i put it under (maybe nature is truthful) but i just want to know what everyone from all backgrounds thinks of my writing. thanks.
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scary but good.
i really liked this poem a lot. it reminds me of edgar allen poe. (and i kept picturing the boy as a huge creep with a hunchback) haha