Student at UC Berkeley
- Member since November 5, 2007.
- I am a 18 year old girl from California (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm writing :).
- I have 11 comments, 3 archived poems
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on mandible by clouds, on November 17, 2007Wow, thank you so much. I'm so glad you like it, especially that you almost wish you'd written it
That's incredibly high praise, so thank you so much.
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I find this...
haunting?
That's not quite the word. But it's puzzling to me with its lack of clarity, which is something I quite like. It's very... "mist"-y. I think since it's so unclear, it adds to the poem. It could be anything. What it makes me think of is probably not what you intended, and probably another person's view would shoe something even more different, I'm interested in the story behind this, if you would care to tell it I would be interested in the story behind it if I didn't have the means to find out what the story was, but since this option is available, I'm of course going to ask.
I don't know. I like it. It could be... anything. It's very... I can't explain it. Like I said, it's got a mist-like quality.
language: 5, rhythm: 4, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.
