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Comeback2009

  • Last seen on Sep 13 11:41 AM. Member since March 28.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Dealt with guilt".
  • I am a 16 year old person (United States)
  • I have 7 comments, 3 archived poems

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  • on Beneath a Crescent Moon by CarlySeye, on August 18
    "We speak to each other beneath the breakthrough phase of a waxing crescent moon

    Love amasses beneath the cracks of a crumbing ego"

    This part is really good. It's like the clouds are the ego and the moon can shine once the ego is gone.

    The peom has a ery great "ring" to it. I lik it so much, But those first two lines are great

  • on Name changed to protect innocence by comeback2009, on August 18
    Thank you, was was going for a song like thing but I though it might be strange.