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Crashdive

  • Last seen on Dec 3 5:15 PM 2008. Member since November 19, 2008.
  • I am a 29 year old person
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  • Brian Balzer : Hello Crashdive on December 5, 2008
    Welcome to sharepoetry. This is a small, yet rapidly growing community of talented poets. Most of the folks here are fairly friendly most of the time. If you have any questions feel free to holler. I'm happy to help anytime I can. Enjoy your stay. I have compiled a list of helpful hints I will send to you that would help explain a few things. They explain the point system and how to win a free membership and things like that. Let me know if you if you find them helpful and if you think of anything that could be added. Just a note, this is not an automated message. It is a personal welcome from a fellow poet. Welcome.
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  • on An Emotional Con by marcusmoore, on December 3, 2008

    ahhh

    yes, this is a very familiar scenario with both men and women. But like said before me some ways of being used aren't all that bad hehe. Back to the poem; I liked it a bunch. Thought it was greatly written and really put you in the place of the character, which you've done well before.
    I'm becoming a very quick fan of your style of writing and the way that you use your words to get the emotions across. TY for sharing this write with everybody here, obviously its well liked. I'm looking forward to reading more of the poetry you mentioned and the poets you mentioned I should look at as well. TY for everything so far, sorry I can't come on that often my pc isn't working that well right now. I hate the feeling you describe in the very first stanza, that's a very terrible feeling. This is very relatable. nicely done man

    Crash/preggers

  • on Bored Titty-BarTender by marcusmoore, on December 3, 2008

    awesum

    Hi Marcus, I thought this poem contained humor and great imagery that really put you in the place of the character. I loved the way that it wasn't completely a rhyme poem or just a free verse poem either, I like the way that you seem to have binded them to create a hybrid poem that's very attractive in it's form. You had a lot of nicely written lines and phrases in this poem. My favorite stanza was:

    "I'm feeling out of place
    in my own sty.
    Keep drowning,
    still thinking
    that I am dry."

    There were other favorites of mine but others have already mentioned them and it seems pointless to praise you further when you obviuosly have an excellent write. Congrats and thanks for the read.

    Preggers