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Dancegirl

i go by the alias of dancegirl.
7.25.1990 (leo, year of the horse, pele goddess. reluctant teenager. my peers frustrate me. waiting to get on with my life.)
residence: northern california
ethnicity: african american, 1/16th native american (choctaw tribe)
interests: dance. books. poetry (obviously). writing. music. activism. feminism. (fighting the power). interesting people who aren't afraid to be to push/break the limits of what is considered "normal".

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  • on Alienated by dancegirl, on July 8, 2007
    thank you. i wrote this piece in about 10 minutes six months ago, and haven't edited it at all, but i will after reading these comments.

  • on untitled by , on July 6, 2007
    It's hard for me to find something to criticizes here, i'm really a fan of this piece. I love how it takes a different direction in the end, and the last stanza ends it so well. Sad, yet beautiful.

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