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Dave ochs

  • Member since January 31, 2006.
  • I am a guy from California (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm depressed.
  • I support the site as a gold member
  • I have 3,651 comments, 177 archived poems, 1 story

My Poetry

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  • Ambition Sucks
    I don’t like / early to bed / early to risers / apple shiners / brown nosers / butt kissers / goal setters / point getters / perfect resumes / hand shakers / wave makers / dress for successers / boot polishers / boot l
    350 words, 18 comments, March 14
  • Boob
    There’s a woman I know / whose going into hoc / selling her kids / bunk-beds, toys, clothes / everything must go / she needs the money
    84 words, 26 comments, March 7
  • Take My Advise
    The cheapest thing / in the world / is advice / it’s always being / heaped on you / even though / you didn’t ask for it / then when
    98 words, 26 comments, February 26
  • Montezuma’s Revenge
    Last night I went / to one of those Indian gaming casinos / to see what all the buzz was about / an enormous smoke filled room / with slot machines / of every make and model / where the dregs of society / bet their hard earned wages
    115 words, 12 comments, February 22

My other items

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  • cold feet at storywrite
    Cold Feet
    Everyday after school I walked by Victoria’s Secret. In the display window were

Guest Book

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  • Saltaire on January 20
    Your story "Cold Feet" was pretty cute. It would make a great short film. My only beef was with the misspellings.
  • dave ochs : hey satincat on October 25, 2009
    thanks for commenting on my story. they don't come often but they're fun when they do. I'll be looking to read more of your work, i like what i see.
    dave
  • TBelle : 'Cold Feet' on October 24, 2009
    Hi Dave,

    I really enjoyed your story called 'cold feet' on story write!

    S
  • Mxracingkid55 : Hey on October 2, 2009
    So sorry I totally ment to send a message!
    A POLITE signing is that
    You work is amazing,
    a favorite too many!
    Hope it works with you and your work!

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Comments

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  • on Atomic Schoolbag by rhetorica, 1 day ago

    hey rhet.

    your one of the few poets where if you had a book I could read maybe thirty or forty poems at a clip, the average is three, then I'm exhausted.
    dave

  • on crucifixion by callman, 1 day ago

    hey callman

    top-notch here, this work has a certain feel to it. its like Poe enters the garden of eden.
    dave