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I have been dabbling in writing poetry since grade school . I won a poetry contest we were suppose to write about smoky the bear any way that's where it began.
Then i met my husband who is a entertainer and we started writing songs together me the lyrics and him the music. We did that for years. One of them "Thanks To The Fool" was in billboard magazine as picked to hit the charts but that did not happen. We still write music together and now my granddaughter performs with my husband as grandfather and granddaughter duo which you may see a sample of our songs at www.myspace.com/heartsoul. But now back to me I want to go back to my first love of writing poetry. So I am a little rusty. I am very excited about doing what I love. I would like to share some of my poetry and read other people's poetry.

  • Last seen on Dec 6 5:10 PM 2008. Member since November 24, 2008.
  • My mood is , and quote is " creative".
  • I am a woman from California (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm Part owner in small music business.
  • I have 2 comments

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  • deanie : welcome on December 1, 2008
    Thank you so much for the welcome,I have never done this before so it will take me a little time to get used to what I am suppose to do so please be patient. I am looking forward to getting to know everyone.

    Deanie
  • Brian Balzer : Hello Deanie on November 24, 2008
    Welcome to sharepoetry. This is a small, yet rapidly growing community of talented poets. Most of the folks here are fairly friendly most of the time. If you have any questions feel free to holler. I'm happy to help anytime I can. Enjoy your stay. I have compiled a list of helpful hints I will send to you that would help explain a few things. They explain the point system and how to win a free membership and things like that. Let me know if you if you find them helpful and if you think of anything that could be added. Just a note, this is not an automated message. It is a personal welcome from a fellow poet. Welcome.
    Read ya 'round,
    BKB

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  • on {/} Regret's Secret {\} by marcusmoore, on December 2, 2008

    I like it very much

    It pulls you right in to the story as if you were that person to relate to.

  • on untitled by , on December 1, 2008

    awesom

    that is very touching and enlightening