- Last seen 1 day ago. Member since July 23, 2006.
- I am a 22 year old girl (India)
- When I'm not writing, I'm probing the visibility of a perception while risking each line to a design.
- I have 111 comments, 18 archived poems
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on Divine Love by purple esprit, on April 8
beautiful
Your work brought happy tears into my eyes, it is simply beautiful.It brings down all confusions, all problems and makes you feel that He's there with you every time so why is there a need to worry.
There's a deeper thought behind each of your word as in the one that says "Yet patiently He waits for us to learn".
It is just beautiful.In a way I am thankful to you as your words brought peace to me.
interesting
I found your poem really interesting,talking about the early morning, the sound of the black bird, the movement of variance in the early morning thoughts.
Realizing the very idea of creation around with a simple idea to celebrate the nature's creation around us.
This life should be celebrated as we will never get it again and amidst all these thoughts a sensitive mind is rich in observing the sensory responses of his own and the world around him.
All your words have one thread in the transparent thoughts that is life while they join in to make this poem.
The whole write carries a distinct space for the reader to fill in his thoughts while he or she reads in.
This is what I experienced through the words.
khushboo