- Last seen on Jun 19 9:19 PM 2007. Member since March 27, 2007.
- I am a 30 year old man from Texas (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm engineer.
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on untitled by , on April 18, 2007
thanx
yea the word "rain" might seem over used but i say it keeps falling down because she is crying. i turned the first simaly into a mediphore with the last line. or something
duely noted
i fixed the typoes and there were alot..sorry about that. and its a song that only a certain group of locals from where i live would fully understand without the notes. kind of like a local anthem. if i left baranget out of it i would loose some of the nastalga(i spelled that wrong) so i put the notes in there for all ya "bennies"(haha, local joke) thanx for readin it and you made it better.