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  • on The Ninety Nine Man by dshah3, on June 19, 2007
    Thanks for liking my poem..I am glad you liked it..This was one of the first poems I wrote after almost a 15 year sabbatical from English Poetry!!..(hehe..had written nothing in English since I was in 4th grade)..thanks for pointing out the mistakes as well..will try and improve in the future..

  • on [ M……O…..M!!!!!] by Kiddy, on June 19, 2007
    yeah..i do this kinda stuff to my mom quite often..but then she has a habit of keeping my things at "organised" places. I hate it. Sometimes people just dont understand that a mess has quite a method to itself. As far as the poem is concerned, its simple and to the point. "Uf" is more of an Indian expression really, dont think everyone here may get it. Monday morning blues are a great leveler..dont think anyone will have a problem relating to those though.