I am now 56. Still a medical receptionist and will be until retirement.
- Last seen on Nov 25 5:00 AM 2008. Member since October 28, 2005.
- I am a 56 year old woman (United Kingdom)
- When I'm not writing, I'm Medical Receptionist.
- I have 570 comments, 48 archived poems
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on The Words Not Spoken by emma cameron, on September 8, 2008Hi,
Believe it or not I have finally edited this poem with your suggestion of changing the "girl" into a woman.It is more appropriate as the subjuect of the poem is 46 years old now.Thankyou for you helpful advice.
Kind regards Emma

vivid imagery
What happened to "this throne of kings...this sceptered isle, set in the silver sea"Which land are you writing about?
No matter,your imagery is powerful and although our lands are beautiful to look at the way we are forced to live affects our view
of our surroundings.
It reminds me of The Boom Town Rats song "I Don't like Mondays"
Well done for such thought provoking imagery