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  • Muhammad Shanazar : Thanks and thanks on March 8
    I have words for the grand appreciation done for my poem "The Descending Sun" I was not expecting such a great comment. I shall return the favour. At present what can I do is that I am going to include you among my favourites and expect the same. A gain thank, Tell me you name and address I shall send you the book goingto be broght out very soon, i intend to include these commemts in the poem.
    Muhammad Shanazar
    shanazar@hotmail.com

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  • on The Flail, 24/5/8 by Exoskeletal, on May 29

    no verdict

    I very much want to understand what it is that I am reading. I am having very real difficulty getting a grasp of the subject matter. I have several strong ideas only to have them wiped out later in the poem.
    Some language problems may be causing this. American vs. Australian.
    "Sharps?" Sharp things to pierce the ankles?
    "I took his mucous" has a homosexual connotation or sometimes refers to spitting.
    I like the juxtapositioning of "justice" and "equilibrium"
    This is a reaction to a photograph.
    Who was "tied but alert" the poet or the person with whom he was having the encounter?
    What is "predicted sickly?"

    This has the possibility of being a powerful set of images. I, as a reader, would just like to be a bit more "in on" what it is you are describing.

    Sorry to be so dense.
    Eosmia

  • on Anti-Poem by eosmia, on May 29

    Definition please

    What is "opinion based wording"? Sounds very collegiate.
    eosmia