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  • on Longing by Mark McNulty, on November 14, 2007

    wonderful

    I like this. It makes me wonder if the bicycle simply wants to ride again or if it's longing to have someone that wants to put it to use.

    language: 3, rhythm: 4, subject: 3, tone: 4, form: 4.

  • on untitled by , on November 6, 2007
    i'm in japan and i found frozen edamame at a marketfor 99 cents. i just made a bunch for dinner. so for that reason and a hundred more i love this poem