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• on God at Play by myrataal, on September 22, 2007

  Beautiful.

  My favorites are lines 14-17 I did not find anything awkward in this.I found that this has a beauty in the simplicity of the way it is written. I truly enjoyed reading this.

  language: 5, rhythm: 4, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.

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