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Eternal-devotion

  • Last seen on Sep 22 10:02 AM 2007. Member since September 22, 2007.
  • I am a 65 year old person
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  • Eternal-devotion at allpoetry
    Eternally devoted to God
    is why this was my choice.
  • A Prayer for You at allpoetry
    Dear Kelly! Only God knows the extent of what you are going through. I know that you have an infinite belief in Him. I also realize that sometimes your belief is sorely tested. I am sending this prayer out to Him
  • Why ? Natural Disasters ! at allpoetry
    Humanity asks why there are so many natural disasters. I wonder if they shouldn't ask themselves why they slaughter Gods children.

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  • on God at Play by myrataal, on September 22, 2007

    Beautiful.

    My favorites are lines 14-17 I did not find anything awkward in this.I found that this has a beauty in the simplicity of the way it is written. I truly enjoyed reading this.