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was this a chance in fate at allpoetry
To be finshed
[ if love was ment to be, ] at allpoetry
if i could say some to aj i donno wat itll be cause im in love with him
you are the one at allpoetry
Sitting in this room,
Its lonely and cold,

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on I am by Keaton Banks, on October 25, 2007
you are some one who can only....no..... we can't tell who you are you got to find it out for your self noone can do it for you you can give any one this poem but who you are is deep with in you and its up to you to find that out for your self. But other wise this good just be who you and do what you wanna do you got a lot to go for your self

misty
xoxo
language: 3, rhythm: 5, subject: 1, tone: 1, form: 3.
on Reading in the Bath by Silver Spirit, on July 12, 2007
theres a heap of rhyming to it i loved it keep it up
language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.

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