- Last seen on Sep 4 2:31 PM. Member since April 12, 2006.
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282 words, September 3. In Adult, Angst, Contemporary, Free verse, Hope, Life, Personal, Society, Spiritual
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/ / He didn't know why / today was different. / Seeking perhaps to distance himself / from this new, / slow-motion silence / of piling, a241 words, 1 comment, February 12. In Angst, Contemporary, Dark, Free verse, Life, Sad, Society, Spiritual, Death, Pain
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/ In the forefront / of the onslaught / when the Janjaweed attacked, / there she was, / clothed in black, / astride her camel, / screaming220 words, 5 comments, February 12. In Angst, Contemporary, Dark, Free verse, Life, Society, Spiritual, Pain, Death. Reward
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Plumeister : Dude... on September 3, 2007You're super smart and your meaty grasp on the English language wields the written word with grace and efficacy. Such that I feel like a ham-handed hack. You do nice work and I think you need far more kudos. Hence I am here, effusing your page with my oozing ebullience. Hope you enjoy it, and "more please."
Al
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on Hired Hand by gdb, on September 3, 2007
Thank you
FransB,
Thank you for taking the time to thoughtfully comment on this piece. I know this work presents a particular challenge and really appreciate your comments and reflections regarding that.
gdb
gG - Thank You
Thank you for your thoughtful comments. This is a problematic issue to deal with, without becoming trite, predictable, political or repetitious of others' writings. I hope to present a more unique focus upon the source and specific effects of war as it is birthed in people, one by one, or requires their involvement. At the "Heart of War" web page, there is a link to a sister site: "The Heart of War Quotations", which you might find interesting, if not insightful.Thank you again for taking the time to both read and offer your comments.
gdb