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I.Birkkjaer

My Poetry

  • We Open Our Eyes Just To Close Them Again
    sleeping and awake / is virtually one / differentiating merely / by a factor of discomfort / maybe pain / / stress is now undefined / nonetheless / more apparent in the blood / than before / / inversely / level of thought / hit
    55 words, January 27. In Discomfort, Life, Pain, Creativity, Body
  • The Ex.
    a hero returns / no place for landing / / this is the new world / her finest creation / / full of words / male friends, alcohol and confusion / last bit of teenage frustration / / unfold his cape / catch her hand, her universe
    43 words, 2 comments, January 18. In Relationship, Distance, Love, Life, Alcohol, Sex, Hero
  • 2084
    In this world we do no longer have goods and bads, truths and falses nor rights and wrongs. - we do not have positives and negatives. The positives are negative and the negatives are positive. Obama has come with change, he is the messiah but he has also
    214 words, 2 comments, April 8, 2009. In Politics, Government, Happiness, Aldous Huxley, George Orwell, Utopia, Barack Obama

Guest Book

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  • Far out on February 19, 2009
    Don't do it i.Birkkjaer.
    Just look at the sky.
  • Truthful Sinner on February 10, 2009
    Just stopping by to say hi, Wow ur a really beautiful girl
  • february angel on January 11, 2009
    Hey ! I love your blog and your picture by the way .Just wanted to sign your guest book.Will check your work when I have more time .
  • Brian Balzer : Hello I.Birkkjaer on December 10, 2008
    Welcome to sharepoetry. This is a small, yet rapidly growing community of talented poets. Most of the folks here are fairly friendly most of the time. If you have any questions feel free to holler. I'm happy to help anytime I can. Enjoy your stay. I have compiled a list of helpful hints I will send to you that would help explain a few things. They explain the point system and how to win a free membership and things like that. Let me know if you if you find them helpful and if you think of anything that could be added. Just a note, this is not an automated message. It is a personal welcome from a fellow poet. Welcome.
    Read ya 'round,
    BKB

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  • on Ellesa by Far out, on January 28
    I think this is really great. Its a reassurance.
    Especially the second section/stanza hits home.

  • on Clean Wood by Windhover, on January 28
    I can't really make too much sense of it. But maybe that's okay.
    I think you could edit it or rethink it to make it more smooth.