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  • on Defining Love by DivaDeb, on September 17, 2006

    excellent poem

    I do really believe that real love does exist and I have my one and only love in my life. There was not a single part in the poem that I did not think was least but everything was so meaningful feelings and words. THe poem says it all how you really deeply love a person. The title does fit in the poem. Excellent write.

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  • on Without You by Niveche, on August 23, 2006

    awesome work

    You wrote such an awesome poem that can relate all of your deep feelings of a person you truly loved yet out of your life which can rip you into pieces. You did expressed in all the lines how you felt from being away from that person. When I read it a few times, I felt the hurt, the pain, the sadness inside of me when a person I was with in the past. You do not need to change it at all, leave this as it is. Great write, you have the talent inside to flow all of the feelings on paper.

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