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Unconditional

To all of those I've never met
and yet love just the same
I want to ease your heartache
to take away your pain

I'm reminding you you're special
in so very many ways
I'm here to give you testimony
that you have a friend today

You'll not be left all alone
to just fend for yourself
Though miles do seperate us
Your heartache I have felt

When you're feeling lonely
or your heart fills with despair
Simply close your eyes my friend
you must know that I am there

You may cry upon my shoulder
until I'm completely wet
I will be crying with you
of that you'd better bet

I'll wrap my arms around you
to just hold you for awhile
or kiss you oh so softly
if that will make you smile

It simply tears me up inside
to know that you are hurting
So if I think I'll make you laugh
there may be some harmless flirting

My love is Unconditional
it simply has no price
I gave it to you freely
when you came into my life

Author notes

This was written for those who have shared with me their heartache and pain.
I'm sure you know just who you are; there's no need to list your names.
Please feel free to call on me if ever you're in need.
I can't say it near enough - you have a friend in me.
If you need to talk all night there isn't any worry.
As long as you are hurting I'm simply in no hurry.

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Comments

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  • ashley-dani
    November 17, 2008

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    It was truly amazing.
    It makes me think of all the people who have helped me with all my problems. All the people who have ever helped me. And this makes me truly appreciate what they have done for me.
    And thanks for all your help (welcoming and helping me navigate this site and all)

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.


  • XxTearsHaveFallenxX
    November 17, 2008

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    WOW

    WOW this piece really got to me, Thanks for telling me about it brain it is amazing, and you really help a lot when i need that extra help, when i talk to you about my problem it seemed like you helped me because I am starting to understand everything i am feeling now and i think that maybe now that I understand what I am feeling I might be able to help myself a little more now. How did you do it, your an awesome person, and thank you for being there. Your poem is amazing and It's my favorite, btw all your poems are amazing.

    Your friend
    chandra .c.

    • Brian Balzer Greeters member
      November 17, 2008
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      Thank you,

      for all the wonderful things you've said about me and my poetry. I wanted to share this with you so you would understand how I feel and why I'm so willing to help you when I can. I'm gald you are starting to understand what you're feeling. That is the first step. I'm glad I could help you. I did it by hearing what you were saying and not just listening to you talk. Then I simply told you what my experiences in life have taught me. You are also a good friend and I'm grateful I met you. As I've said before I'm willing to talk anytime you need to. Don't hesitate to ask.

      Your friend,
      Brian


  • Tai-San
    November 17, 2008
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    This is so good. Brian, this shows that you are a wonderful friend, and you are.

    • Brian Balzer Greeters member
      November 17, 2008
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      Thank you,

      I know that you are a wonderful person and deserve a true friend that loves you for who you are and I do.

      Hugs and kisses,
      Your friend,
      Brian

  • Miss O Malley
    November 16, 2008
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    ur a great friend, im sure about that!

    • Brian Balzer Greeters member
      November 16, 2008
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      Thank you

      You are also are a wonderful friend. I feel very fortunate to have made a friend in you.
      Your friend,
      Brian


  • Inkling
    November 16, 2008

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    You're so nice. It makes me feel bad sometimes. Now I want to do something nice for you. What can I give my Burger King? I love you SO much.

    • Brian Balzer Greeters member
      November 17, 2008
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      Thank you,

      so very much. You have no reason to feel bad. You have already done many nice things for me. You've given me many wonderful comments. You have made me happy when I was down. You have made me laugh, which is always good. You kept me company when I was lonely. Not to mention you *spray painted* my guest book at storywrite so it would be colorful. You have also already given me the most wonderful gift of all, your friendship. You do not need to give me anything. What more could I ask for?

      I love you too Inky,
      Hugs and kisses,
      Brian


  • Winter Wolf
    November 16, 2008

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    awe. brain this is really sweet, I love this poem so much thanks for writing about me and I am glad I was your inspiration , I really enjoyed this wonderful piece it's very heart warming and it makes me smile I am glad you are always there for me I am glad I make you smile just by being okay I am glad you care so much about me this is very touching I love it thank so much for being a great friend . this is amazing :] it touched my heart made me feel warm inside just to know you think I am special and something to you I am sorry if I made you cry and thanks for showing me your emotions :] don't worry if I am ever in pain I will talk to you :] your the best friend ever thank you so much for supporting me and showing me love and affection I know you truly understand where I am coming from life is rough but its getting better know I have people who care about me thanks so much this made my day ^.^ I love you my friend

    • Brian Balzer Greeters member
      November 16, 2008
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      Thank you

      I'm glad you love it you are one of the ones I love so much out here. You instantly won a place in my heart. I could not and would not turn my back on you. You are indeed very special. You are such a wonderful person. Those who do not see that are fools. I'm honored to be able to warm your heart and bring some love and affection into your life. You deserve so much in life. I am more than willing to cry for you and with you. There is no shame in that for me. If my hurting for you or with you brings you comfort I'm more than willing to pay that price ten times over. I'm glad to hear that you life is getting better. I will pray that it continues to do so. I'm so happy to have made you day. I want to share another poem with you that I wrote years ago. Here is a link:
      http://sharepoetry.com/poem/28038

      I love you too sweetheart,
      Hugs and kisses,
      Brian


  • gingerhall1976 silver member
    November 16, 2008

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    this made me *cry*

    I am here to testify
    that all you say is true
    I've never found a freind
    in life, like I have found in you

    you have held my hand through
    all of my recent turmoil
    throughout all of yours as well
    your soul it did not spoil

    for that makes you a person
    that I truly admire
    an inspiration to us all,
    and for you I'd walk through fire

    there never was a time
    that you asked for a return
    for all of the kindness you've
    shown and all of the concern

    I will forever cherish you
    for all you've done for me
    I will never forget the fact
    that you loved me...
    Unconditionally


    I have never met a better person than you and for that I will always love YOU...unconditionally! YOU ARE THE BEST!!! I love you Brian for everything that you are, and thank God that I was blessed enough to have you in my life!

    • Brian Balzer Greeters member
      November 16, 2008
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      Thank you

      I want you to know that we are even. Yours made me cry as well. It is such a wonderful poem You have written for me. I will cherish it forever. Would you do me the honor of posting this on my guest book? I would mean so much to me to have it there as well as here. I've sent a few young ladys messages to make sure they read this and knew that they were a part of my inspiration. I knew you would know that you were a large part of my inspiration for this poem. I love you too Ginger. I love you with all of my heart. I remind you again that I too thank God to be blessed with having you in My life. You are a blessing too. Please never forget that.
      Hugs and kisses
      Love,
      Brian

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