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Jasonbensson

My name is...what?
My name is...who?
Anyways its Jason.

  • Last seen on Nov 14 12:18 AM. Member since March 12.
  • I am a 25 year old man from Ohio (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm BUSY.
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  • on Dream Girl of the Week by marcusmoore, on November 10

    yo yo

    hey marco, thanks for sending me to a few of those poets that have joined the site since I have been gone, It's nice to be back, but like I told you on MSN, I won't have all that much time to be reading and commenting, so it'll take me a while to read all the people's poems that you have given to me, thanx, I've read some and introduced myself to a couple of them tho. I've seen that you haven't really been posting that many poems lately...has something been wrong my man?? I mean what's up you know you can talk to me. Hope things are going alrite. But yo this poem was really sweet my man, I think i know what you are referring to here, I sometimes dream of girls or a girl that i can't often recognize, or I do recognize the girl, like somebody I went to school with, maybe somebody i met at a bar or something like that, but I'd usually want them for at least that day, like a "kindergarten crush" ya know hehe, yea of course you know what i'm talking bout. Well a damn good poem my man, came from the heart, good imagery, show an almost painful longing for this woman that is only alive in your dreams, but constantly changing, that's the part that i found the most interesting b/c it fits the title perfectly. Just overall a very great poem if you ask me. Thanks for sharing my brother and hope to see some more of your poems being posted more frequently...I mean you used to post about a poem ever week or so, now I haven't seen any before this in like a month or two at least...that's not good my man, but this one was definitely worth the wait. aight bro, take care of yourself. i mean it man...A poet that doesn't write is a soul that's lost. Keep writing my ninja!

    Peace out
    Jay-Boner

  • on Breeding Bad Luck by jasonbensson, on November 10

    hey there enoq

    it's nice to hear from you...I've heard only good things about you from one of my better friends from online, Marcus Moore. I can barely make it onto this site, but when I first joined Marcus welcomed me with open arms and helped me along the way with some of my writings which were very amateur at the time, most still are which is why they aren't even on here. they're still in my notebook as drafts and unfinished. I'm glad that you found it to be lyrical, as I also share Marcus' passion for song lyrics. I hope I can get some more poetry on here soon and that you will find one or some of those at least close to par, like this one. i thought that this one was pretty good after I had bandaged it up. Thank you for coming on by and taking a gander at my one poem hehe, well thanks man for stopping by to read, i know how many people wont leave comments and I hate that more than NE-thing. especially when you leave a comment for them, or if you've left more than one and they can't even return that favor, some people are just in it for themselves tho, what can ya do rite?

    well nice meeting you and my man Marcus was rite, you're a cool cat man and ya got some talent!! Keep up the good work bro. I hope you'll continue to read some of my stuff If I can get anything posted soon. Thanks bro.

    Jay Dude {elephant's ass hair} lol so you can call me Jay Ass Hair