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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy : Welcome to share poetry John-729 :) on March 8
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  • on The Game of Love by painterofwords, on July 18
    I really like the way you've added a new feel to "the game of love" metaphor. it gives it a a whole new light.

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  • on into the dusky skies she went by leigh heart, on July 18
    First of all I'm gravely sorry for your loss.
    This is a great testimony of a beautiful person in a darkening world. I really like how you've used colors as a representation of purity and dreams. I'm sure it does your sister justice. Great poem. as a suggestion i would say just clean up the first part and make it flow a litle better.

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