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  • on An Endless Word by , on May 31, 2006

    Wonderful

    I loved it, i loved the idea behind mixing all these beliefs nice format, great Bible Quote too.

    I sugest you read my poem Universal God, I have a similar  work.

    language: 3, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 4.

  • on They think i'm their god... by jewell, on January 21, 2006

    OUSTANDING

    You are the man. This one is just great. I liked it, God work. I wrote something similar, perhaps you should read it: http://sharepoetry.com/poem/show/3883

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 4.