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on Herring Gulls by , on January 29, 2006I never said that I didn't like the second stanza. The writing style is starkly in contrast to the rest of the poem - much more vulgar and biting. Unless it was your original plan to have the second stanza stand out more than the other three, I find it a bit distracting.
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on Herring Gulls by , on January 26, 2006
Nice.
I really like most of this poem, but the second stanza is so different from the rest that it seems like someone else wrote it (especially lines 5 and 6). Overall, I enjoyed reading this.. Rewarded 1
