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Hi.

I'm Krista.

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  • pita baby420 on June 3, 2009
    kewl. this means i have two sisters and they are twins. oh wait, now i feel left out.
  • SimplyNoodle : :O on May 27, 2009
    -gets very confussed- theres two of you?

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  • on Haunted Dreams by Brian Balzer, on June 19, 2009
    This is full of heartache. I imagined watching this all play out and I felt the devestation and hurt through your eyes.

    "of how easily I was forgotten
    while you were in his arms."

    ^Very hard-hitting and Very, Very emotional. Great last lines... it leaves the reader with a lasting impression of remorse and heartache.


    -Krista

  • on Cursed. by just smile, on June 3, 2009
    Hehehe. Muahahaha. Thanks.


    -Krista