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Khj84

I am not a poet, but i love poetry.
I'm more a painter but have always been interested in creative writing so i'm hoping to improve my skills.
Mainly i'm writing as an outlet at the moment.

  • Last seen 2 days ago. Member since September 29.
  • I am a 24 year old woman (New Zealand)
  • I have 4 comments

My Poetry

  • I Will Hope For You
    What happened to you, my darling? / That I didn't see / To replace your laughter / With bitter tears / And pull you away from me / I saw
    196 words, 3 comments, October 1. In Hope, Sad, Love
  • unseen hell
    You don’t know me. / It’s been too long since I’ve been around. / I am here. But you cant see me. Cant hear me. / I am trapped here in the dark. / I see everything / The sun, the beauty, the laughter and the joy / And it destroys me. / Som
    97 words, 4 comments, September 29. In depression

Guest Book

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  • Brian Balzer : Hello Khj, on September 29
    Welcome to sharepoetry. If you want to improve your skills as a writer you've joined the right community. There are many skilled and helpful writers on this site. The best way to get them to read your work is by reading thiers and leaving comments. The comments don't always have to be profound to be appreciated. Often they will come to read yours and offer thier opinion. Feel free to call on me if you ever have any questions. I'm always happy to help. I believe you may surprise your self and find you were a poet all along. After all poetry is a form of expression and did you not say you used your writing to release emotions? Releasing emotions. That sounds like expressing yourself and poetry is...
    Read ya now,
    BKB
  • Enoq : Welcome on September 29
    This is not an automated message. I just was up this late and wanted to welcome you.

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Comments

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  • on the lion that had no claws by ravenontheleft, on October 11

    holy shit

    This poem made cry, which means it hit a nerve for me. I relate. Your imagery is incredible. I love the title. The nasty ones always go after the ones that don't fight back huh?
    wow. this one is amazing.

  • on I Will Hope For You by khj84, on October 1

    Thankyou

    Hey Brian i'm so glad you liked this one i tried to put into practise your advice from my last poem!