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  • on Twenty two and nine months by twentysecond, on December 9, 2007

    I enjoyed it.

    Reminds me of my poem I posted on here.. "Fifty and Two"
    Coincidence, or did it serve as inspiration?

    Anyhow, it was a joy to read.
    I applaud you.

  • on Body Carved by ali-rain, on September 7, 2007

    Amazing

    This was a beautifully written poem. The images you have created are beyond incredible.

    I especially like your "marble opinions", and the last line, "I'll take another drink". It captures the essence of the poem well, and serves as a nice ending.

    This poem is relatable. Keep up the good work.

    -krystal.

    language: 5, rhythm: 4, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 5.