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Ladydwarf

  • Last seen 1 day ago. Member since August 15, 2006.
  • I am a 57 year old person (United States)
  • I support the site as a silver member
  • I have 365 comments, 49 archived poems

My Poetry

  • Cloud break
    The constant clouds of gray that hung over me like worn out tennis shoes after a long hot summer finally broke. / Just when I had resign
    103 words, 13 comments, August 1
  • Seeds
    A bit of a rant
    123 words, 7 comments, July 20

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  • ladydwarf on February 20
    Hey Thanks DB. If my daughters dad had understood this phase of my life we would still have been married......however found a man that does so all is well that ends well..
  • ladydwarf : mp-3 on February 11
    lorindfw@yahoo.com
  • riveralex : PS if you can send me an email address on February 11
    I can send you an mp3 that might be of interest - best RA riveralex@mac.com

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  • on Curly Girlie by rhetorica, on November 25

    hi

    Loved this piece.....especially the nonchalant way she reacted at the end of it.............."with a whimper...not a thud" you have told this tale well and leaves me wondering if this was a metaphor? did someone like this really exist? or does this wanton creature stand for someonething else? and that is a true test of fine poetry..........when someone cares about the verse.....great job!

    . Rewarded 6

  • on For You are Not You (Gaia) by iphios, on November 25

    hi

    What deep feelings are displayed here............"and your crown of curls
    limp in its unnatural light" as any woman can tell you lifstyle and diet change can sure make a difference in our appearance.........looks like you have trully pin pointed your emotions......and that is, after all, what poetry is for

    . Rewarded 6