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Ladyjulie

  • Last seen on Aug 16 1:49 AM. Member since July 30, 2007.
  • I am a 26 year old girl (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm working or riding the bus (fun fun fun).
  • I have 9 comments, 5 archived poems

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  • on The intensity of this love….the downfall of it…. (Bit of a personal rant lol). by MaMa-2-be-Cindy, on March 24

    REAL

    I like this kind of stylized yet stream of consciousness style, especially in the context of being overwhelmed by life but finding comfort in the arms of the person you love. I found the the line "...your warmth remains, beside me and faithful arms securely, hold me" especially strong. It's so true and honest, that need to appreciate the stability within in our ever so chaotic lives.

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  • on The Cub Dreams of You by Iorek, on March 24

    Lovely

    "Save only She who fed me first, None can make me feel so safe" is a beautiful line about the kind of comfort a mother provides. I thought this poem was really beautiful. I love the relationship you so naturally allude to- between yourself and your mother and the comparrision of that kind of love to that you have for a lover.

    nice work!
    -Julie

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