- Last seen on Oct 25 5:15 PM. Member since January 30, 2007.
- I am a 15 year old girl from California (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm dancing, singing, reading, hanging out with my friends, and dancing, dancing, dancing, and did i mention dancing.
- I have 29 comments, 6 archived poems
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- Sleep = Trust at storywrite
to sleep is to trust yourself
trust yourself enough to let your body and your mind be out of your control for hours at a time - Clocks at storywrite
one day i woke up inside a clock
the ticking almost drove me insane - Tear Drops Like Rain at storywrite
hold me close
the long window payne
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on I wanted to talk to you by callman, on May 4omg! this is f-ing amazing!! i think i have to pick my jaw up off the floor! just wow. wow great job
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on Feral by mr backwards, on April 12, 2007ok i thought that this was a very good poem. but i have a few sugestions that might make it better and flow more. where you say "to gain your freedom; lose your fate.' maybe it would flow better if it was 'to gain your freedom; to lose your fate' and 'i seek the fearceness as told in lore' drop the 'in' in 'in lore' and the last line might sound better if it was 'i'm still a man; in wolfs hide" or "i'm stilla man; now in wilfs hide" just a few sujestions?
