- Member since October 31, 2005.
- I am a man (Peru)
- When I'm not writing, I'm teaching English, playing blues guitar.
- I have 657 comments, 181 archived poems, 1 poem
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Bone white linen is spread over a long table / as a coastal breeze ushers in a wedding party. / Two families in front of the spotless white house, / a mix of gowns, black suits and shoes are cast / against the chalky surface like embodied script.<227 words, February 17
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on Assassination of the Unassailable Poet by mojojames, on March 11FT - Thanks for looking at this. I probably should have written "newspaper", since it's just a couple at home, he reading the paper silently while she clic clacs away the time as in tic tocs. None of the images are directly related to the death of the poet, but together are intended to set a mood of loneliness, sadness, loss in a surreal way. Hope this helps, Cheers - R
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on Hefty tune for crows by Chaosophy, on March 11chaosophy - a lot of good images here. Only one I found to be a little trite, "Angels fornicate with devils" maybe the same idea with a little more involved or original touches. "loaves of flesh" and the first two lines with their s - sh- sounds with the d's and k's set up an appealing percussive tone. Seems to me you caught some of Beefheart's style of painting in your images. Well done, Cheers, R
