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  • skipeople : Welcome to SP! on April 1, 2008
    Glad to chat, help, or be ignored. Which ever may flip your pancakes!

    Welcome,
    Ashley

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  • on Mothers by CarlySeye, on August 19, 2008

    lovely

    I really enjoyed the sentiments in this poem. As a mum to a beautiful child adopted from China, who is the love of our lives, I appreciate the miracle that is motherhood.

  • on Mist on the Mountain by Windhover, on June 25, 2008

    love it

    I like the images of seeing trees breathe. I can feel and visualise this place from the description. Enjoyable and simple.Look at recent events in China, and you can see how Mother Earth is scratching. Must read more of your poems, M

    language: 5, rhythm: 4, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 4.