let's make poems out of cliches...
make every one worthy of praise
statements we hear every day
so we can follow what they say
and rhyming every line with "you"
is just what artists have to do
There's really not much else to choose
Because no one wants to hear new news
Birds of a feather plummet together
When both are struck out with one stone
Mother knows best,
But we laid her to rest
On the day that I built Rome...
-Mr Backwards
make every one worthy of praise
statements we hear every day
so we can follow what they say
and rhyming every line with "you"
is just what artists have to do
There's really not much else to choose
Because no one wants to hear new news
Birds of a feather plummet together
When both are struck out with one stone
Mother knows best,
But we laid her to rest
On the day that I built Rome...
-Mr Backwards
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on Mushroom Meditation by tirwander, on October 8psilocubes are indeed nice motivational tools... this conveys the feelings of a shroom trip quite nicely.
as this must be personal, there's only so much one can say about it... it seems very complete, so criticism would be me trying to find something wrong with it. I'm not sure what to say, like after I have tripped myself. You've expressed something difficult to express.
If I could ask one question, it would be what the woman in here represents... the sacred feminine, perhaps? just speculation.
favorite lines
"Writhing and dancing,
While changing colors"
"My world is balanced. "
starts strong. ends strong. good body. a very nice piece.
. Rewarded 8
Moistening the earth referring to returning its saturation?
The dualism was hell for both of them.
A short comment this is, for a short poem. The thoughts this inspired will read for longer than the stimulus, but in mind-words inexpressable.
If awe is flattering... than this is that.