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Ms.sunshine

  • Last seen on Nov 16 5:15 PM. Member since September 1.
  • I am a 26 year old person
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My Poetry

  • Where r u going?
    I brazenly tell him 2 get out / When he opens the door I shout: / / Dont u dare! / U dont care! / / He asks and I say there's nothing's wrong / then crank a tune with a message in the song / / Better figure it out! / With a screw f
    149 words, 1 comment, November 16
  • WHERE IS MY......courage?
    "SO YA".... / *CLEAR THROAT* / "UMMM"...... / "WELL IT'S JUST THAT" / "THERE IS SOMETHING....." / *SIGH* / / / IT'S RIGHT THERE, READY 2
    421 words, 2 comments, September 12. In Humor, Love, Weird
  • Truth Called and I Finally Saw You
    SHOULD I STAY? SHOULD I GO?.......BY THE TIME THE QUESTION IS FORMED.....WE ALREADY KNOW! / / THE WORRY THAT OPPOSES CREATIVITY...FALL AWAY FROM THE CITY..... / THAT SPEEDS IN MY MIND.....AND I FIND....THAT THE LIMITATIONS I PERCIEVE......ARE NOTHI
    259 words, 3 comments, September 2. In Free verse, Lost love, Spoken

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  • Brian Balzer : Ms.sunshine, on September 24
    I'm honored to be your first. On your guestbook that is. I'm glad to have met you. You are a wonderful person and make sharepoetry
    a more pleasant place. I look forward to reading more poems by you. I wanted to invite you to come to my homepage and take a stroll through my Poetry Garden story which is like a philosophy. It's not very long. Then if you would sign my guestbook I'd very pleased.
    Read ya soon?
    BKB
    P.S. WOW you're Pretty!
    Wink, wink.

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  • on My old and gold granny by rhythmdivine, on October 28

    Lovely

    I almost cried!!! My grandfather is 87 and he 2 has such a strong will.....

    I am not particularly observant of rhyme styles, grammar and such.....I appreciate ur poem 4 it's raw emotion and ur honesty.

    . Rewarded 4