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  • on Last Hit by nayomie, on June 20
    thankyou, the question mark isnt meant to be next to why, it doesnt say why cant she tell though,lol, its says we all wonder why?

  • on Dreams And Tears by sensualbutterfly, on June 20
    i loved this so much, the ending hit me. i was getting in to a moment of pure bliss and happiness, when sudenly i'm told its nt real, the relisation of this is something which i'm sure most of us can relate to.
    i loved the imagery in the poem, as i said i actually got cauht in the moment, this makes the ending even more powerful.
    great work!