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  • on Waiting To Drown by APaperFaceOnParade, on August 30, 2007
    An interetsing poem that for me, gave an intersting take on fighting against something which is taking over your life. I don't know if this is the aim of the poem, but I think that most people would relate to this poem. I really like the way vocabulary helped to develop the scene, and you have made the concept of actually drowning alluring.
    I enjoyed the poem.

  • on Cloudless Happiness by nhewittstubbs, on August 30, 2007
    Dear Lad,
    Thank you for your response, I really appreciate it. I think your comment about hiding the real meaning of the poem extremely insightful. I wrote the poem about someone close to me who always comes across as 'perfect' and almost hides bhind this front, refusing to let anyone see the hurt or turmoil that she's really going through. I guess that I didn't realise when writting it that I too was hiding so much.
    Thank you so much for your feedback though, I greatly appreciate it.
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