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So, I've been in a bit of a writing slump for the past year! I've been focusing more on the science and mathematic classes to finish my degree. So I'm back and plan to be checking out everyone's poetry!

A little update on my life: I've applied for a college in Carnforth, England. It's called Capernwray Bible School and it's a freakin castle too! lol so hopefully i'll get in and be able to travel and experience Europe and a plethora of cultures.

Julia


Outstanding poems you should check out:

Majesty by Windhover
The Ever Defiant Poet Remarks To a Tree by Lad
A Path for Things by Lad
Obdurate Flesh by iphios
My Own Private Worship by Mark McNulty
Quotations by Lisa Milligan
Revolutions by RAWright
Spring confessions by Barenya
Bleeding by Burning Blue
A Shadow Haunts Me by Mark McNulty

Poems that you should read of mine:

My Red Balloon
Package in the Attic
Wintry Mausoleum
Damned Silence

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  • The Top of the World at storywrite
    I've lived most my life on rooftops, watching the world beyond mine. Swirling hues of thoughts and emotion color the sky above me. I sit and gaze in delight at the splendid display of vibrant yellows playing with soft pinks,
  • fantasy story idea- like it? at storywrite
    With the slightest raise of his hands,a circle of blue flame encircled Fagan and his companions and consumed any Worgans unfortunate enough
  • My Hypocritical Heart at storywrite
    I was going to be late again. My fingers gripped the steering wheel as my foot pushed the pedal down, accelerating well over the speed limit. I switched lanes as my annoyance grew at the granny driver ahead of me, blaming her

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  • on Bridal Hunt by himanshumodi, on November 23, 2007
    "To seek a girl that I will wed" - i find it somewhat interesting that you said "a girl" instead of "the girl". are you implying something here, such as there isn't just one girl who could suffice as a bride, or that she might not be the only one you will wed in your lifetime?

    "She was the girl who'd always dwelt
    Incognito in my dreams" - one of my fav. parts

    The idea this poem suggests i find so shallow, indeed. i don't believe in the perfect mate. love blinds each person from the others flaws in the sense that we accept them for who they are...that's the beauty of love.

    i enjoyed reading this. the general concept is well defined and voiced well. also, thanks for th cultural background.

    . Rewarded 8

  • on Package in the Attic by nightengale, on May 5, 2007
    I like this poem actually...when I read it I'm reminded why I wrote it, which always makes me smile. How naive, we all once were!

    Thanks for your comments! I haven't been on lately, and I think I'll be coming back in mid june, when all finals, projects, and three graduations are over with. Thanks again!

    julia