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Nish81

I'm a 15 year old guy, (as of January 2007) who lives in Dar-es-Salaam, Tanzania. I love writing poetry, although some of it isn't very good, and I also love reading others' poetry.

Feel free to drop me a line on my email, (or add me on msn/yahoo messenger if you use those) if you want to chat!

homepage: http://nish81.110mb.com

  • Last seen on Nov 5 10:05 AM. Member since January 26, 2007.
  • I am a 15 year old guy (Tanzania)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a student in grade 10 (as of 2007).
  • I have 215 comments, 22 archived poems

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  • Fall at allpoetry
    I started up so high,
    But that doesn't mean anything,
  • No More Pain, No More Feelings at allpoetry
    Feelings are confused,
    Best to lock them up,
  • My Fall at allpoetry
    Each night falls harder
    Than the last,

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  • on M-int by nish81, on June 22, 2007
    Ah, now i understand what you meant! well actually, you got it right in one part of your comment - the bit where you thought i meant 'int' to be 'integer' - that's exactly what I mean. you're right, it's probably an overstretch, but it fit in with the theme.

    you see, the whole poem is just a mathematical equation:
    poem - point = em - int

    the 'po' gets subtracted, the 'em' from 'poem' is left over, as is the '-int' from 'point' - since point was the word being subtracted, the int is negative. 'em' sounds like the letter 'M', so what we get is a letter and a negative number.

    like you said, maybe an overstretch

  • on M-int by nish81, on June 22, 2007
    haha! i think you caught the spirit of the poem perfectly. glad you liked it

    nish(81)