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  • on untitled by , on June 9, 2009
    thanks for youre comment

  • on Broken Wings by Kelsoo., on June 4, 2009
    Though the tone of the poem is melancholy the background you have set is that of hope. i feel your wings are not yet broken it is only a temporary state of tiredness which makes you feel that your wings are broken.as soon as you overcome this you will again fly high that's what life is.nice poem