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  • on sunday morning peaches by Lad, on September 4, 2007

    100% Perfect

    You have said more in 24 words than most can express in 124.This is a good verse, it digs at the soul of the believer. You done good. :-)

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.

  • on My Hallmark Card Poem by the-other-matt, on August 23, 2007

    Excellent Write

    Everything about this poem is so good. I like the way it is put together. you've done a good job. I've enjoyed it a lot. Thanks

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 2, form: 5.